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C.J. Heck's avatar

This is good writing, Kevin. This will hold your readers.

Kevin Nash's avatar

Thank you, C.J. Thanks for the restack as well.

C.J. Heck's avatar

Your welcome, Kevin, always a pleasure.

GeorgeAnn Dingus's avatar

This is a really good western theme story with a dash of redemption thrown in..a winning recipe for sure 👍

Kevin Nash's avatar

Thank you, GeorgeAnn. I have always had a love for westerns.

Tom P's avatar

Always love a good western!

Dennis Reiber's avatar

Amazing story. It's been a long time since I've read a western. I might have to take a walk down those dusty streets again.

Kevin Nash's avatar

When the past comes back to haunt you....

Funny, he could barely remember the romantic and sensuous moments that had led up to that fateful night ten years ago. Long moonlit walks with a beautiful lady, soft kisses, quiet conversations. In his youthful indiscretion, her marital status had not infringed on his mind or his physical desires until reality had leaped out of the darkness with a raging anger and a pointed gun.

Cork Hutson's avatar

OK, Louis Jr. - Way to leave us hanging. There better be some follow-up chapters to this one ...

Ginger Stockwell's avatar

Please keep the story going. I'm hooked.